Correct The Teacher

Below is a paragraph I wrote that I left mistakes in. Copy it and paste it into a new post on your blog and then edit it. Make sure you correct ALL my mistakes!

if there were one thing that i would keep if i had to give away everthing i own it would be my books i would keep my books because they help me disaper into another world. Ilove to read and forget about all my roblems for awile and i like to curl up wit a blanket and i like to turn on some music and i like to read for hours but if i cant have all the other stuff as least i would liek to have some books to read.

Things to check for:
capitalization
spelling
run-on sentences
spacing issues

Journaling

It seems like journaling on blogs is coming easier to students. It's not easier for all of them, but it seems like for the most part they are having less trouble thinking up what to write about and also they are doing a great job on their self editing. I'm still checking their work before they publish, but I am catching less mistakes and when I do see something, they usually see it as soon as I mention it. I guess it just comes from having gone through it so many times. They are really starting to catch on to writing and that is exciting!

Oregon Essay Writing

We are working on essay writing and I thought it would be fun to go out and take pictures of what represents Oregon to each individual and then have them write about it. We walked around downtown and ended up at the capitol. The students came up with some really good pictures and ideas for how that represented Oregon to them. It was nice to get out and do something a little different, and I was really happy to see how well the essays turned out.

We did short essays of 1-2 paragraphs and I had them write a rough draft in their notebook first. It really seemed to help some of them get their ideas flowing, but for others, it seemed to be difficult. I think next time, I might give them the option of typing or writing the rough draft since everyone does the writing process a little differently.

AM class at the capitol building trying not to shiver too much in the frosty morning. With the sun at the morning angle it was difficult to get the gold man to show up. He's really there, but he's just hiding.

Mid class hanging out in the gazebo in Wilson Park beside the capitol. They were good sports about posing for me while I tried to get a good picture with the capitol in the background.

PM class at the capitol. The sun finally came out and we were actually able to get good pictures of the gold man because of the lighting.

How to Upload a Picture from the Kodak Easyshare Cameras to Your Blog

• Make sure your camera is on.
• Plug the camera cord into the camera and into the USB port on the back of the computer.
• Go to the Start menu (on the left hand bottom corner of the screen)
• Go to My Computer
• Go to Zoom Digital Camera

Go into your Blogger account.

• Go to new post
• Click on the little picture image in the upper right hand corner of the toolbar.
• Click Browse (if you want to add more than one picture click on Add Another Image first)
• Make sure you are in the Camera Folder (you should see thumbnails pics)
• Look for your picture and double click your picture to upload.
• After you've chosen the pictures you want, make sure you have checked the Terms of Service box and click Upload.
• Click the Done button when it pops up.
• Your picture should be on your blog.